More than 30 years ago, a writer living in the art town of Berea, KY gave me the lesson of my life. "Take out every word until the paragraph will collapse," said Sidney Saylor Farr, author of "More Than Moonshine: Appalachian Recipes and Recollections." (Is this too long?)
Thank you Susan. I didn’t want to overwhelm everyone with too many tips. Sometimes less is more.
Thanks for the tips, Dianne! I sure needed them haha. Also, I love the format of your posts. I’m taking note!
Hi Winston! Great to see you here. I have to go check out your newsletter now.
Glad to be here. Hopefully you find something there you like!!
More than 30 years ago, a writer living in the art town of Berea, KY gave me the lesson of my life. "Take out every word until the paragraph will collapse," said Sidney Saylor Farr, author of "More Than Moonshine: Appalachian Recipes and Recollections." (Is this too long?)
Hah ha, yes this is a long sentence, Elaine! But the point is well made.
The title of the book is long!
Yes that alone is half the length of the sentence!