On "In a bowl, combine..."
On "In a bowl, combine..."
Judith Jones would be rolling over in her grave.
Back in 2000 I read a rant by Judith Jones, the famous cookbook editor of Julia Child, Claudia Roden and other superstars. She wrote it for the IACP quarterly newsletter. Here’s the lede:
“I have been increasingly concerned as I read through cookbooks these days that recipe writing is almost a lost art. Instructions have been reduced to a meaningless and frequently illiterate formula that neither serves the wood-be cook nor conveys anything of the pleasure of cooking.
For example, a typical recipe will start with this kind of so-called instruction. ‘In a bowl, combine the eggs and the sugar.’
Why does 'In a bowl’ come first? No one talks that way. Would you say, ‘In a suitcase, pack your clothes?’”
She ends by appealing to recipe writers to stop it.
“Why are food writers being encouraged to write recipes in the kind of lackluster language we are seeing today? There is no personality to this kind of writing…Food writing at its finest is sensuous, immediate, and sharply observed. I’d like to see the same applied to the art of recipe writing.”
Since then, I’ve advised clients and students to avoid this kind of language. Instead, I ask them to start with an action verb and to write in a conversational manner. Here’s a little more from Jones:
“I as a cook working alone with a cookbook in my kitchen want to feel there is a person standing behind the recipe, someone who has done it many times and is really conveying to me how the dish should look and feel and taste, inspiring me to give it my best. Each writer should be using her or her own carefully chosen words that reflect the experience of cooking.”
When I expressed on Twitter that “In a bowl, combine…” makes me unhappy, people objected. Elise Bauer, founder of Simply Recipes, tweeted:
Others concurred.
And I learned that “In a bowl, combine…” is house style at two publishing houses!
The problem is that this equipment-first argument isn’t consistent. We don’t write “In a saucepan, add the oil…” or “On a plate, add the flour...” Elise later responded:
Well, I’ve read lots of bad instructions over the years, usually when sitting on the floor assembling furniture. And I don’t think there’s anything unclear about “Combine the flour and spices in a medium bowl.”
But the bigger takeaway is that recipe writing is not just about instructions, but about writing that shows how the author enjoyed cooking a dish. It’s about voice and personality. I’m pretty sure that’s what Jones was trying to say. And it’s why her authors wrote legendary books that are still famous today.
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Oh, this was thorough and fabulous!! (as usual)
When you write a recipe, you want to feel like you're talking to your reader (or cook or baker), talking them through the recipe, in language that's easy to understand and follow along with. There's a way (and a reason, for some) to write dry, formulaic recipes without any hoopla. Magazines and newspapers often do it, where space is a consideration, and will write; Step 1: Combine (or mix) the eggs, sugar, butter, flour and salt in a bowl. Step 2: Add the remaining ingredients. But I think most readers like it when they hear the author's voice while they're making a recipe, whether it be Rose Berenbaum or Ina Garten, who both write different kinds of recipes, but who also both have plenty of fans.